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Dark Angel

Thu Oct 1, 2009, 7:53 PM
It was a very cold night. I as sitting there, in the coffee shop, sipping my coffee. When I heard a scream. I was out of there as fast as I could running into the night. Straight towards the sound of the scream. I quickly made it to the source. The scream belonged to a girl. She was about the age of eighteen. But she wasn't alone. There was one other. A man, about six feet tall standing there with a knife aimed straight at the girl. I decided to step into action. "Hey, you there, leave her alone." I said with authority in my voice. The man slowly turned towards me and said, "Stay out of this or you will die." "I'm afraid I can't do that." I said as the man got an angry look on his face. "Then you will die first!" He yelled as he rushed towards me. As the knife came right at me I dodged just barely making the knife miss then I punched him straight in the gut so hard that he fell to the ground dropping his knife. He spit out blood. He then pulled a gun on me."Take this!" ,he yelled as the bullet went straight into my head. I fell to the ground. "Now come here." ,he said to the girl. "It's your time to die." "Now wait just a minute" ,I said. "I'm not just dead yet." I stood up letting my black wings show. "That was no way to treat a Dark Angel" "How can you...still be...alive?" ,he asked with fear in his voice. "Well thats an easy one. Dark Angels are Immortal." I rushed towards him knocking him out. Then I called the cops and used my powers to erase from the girls mind that I ever existed and that he was hit by a falling brick from the unstable building that was right behind her.

TO BE CONTINUED...

(This is my new story so far. Tell me what you think about it.)

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:iconramen4ever:
Thanks for the add! :)

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Don't copy my awsome siggy. Or else.... >:)
:icontai-rekudo:
your welcome

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:iconevil-bug:
lol, hey nice new avatar :D

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:icontai-rekudo:
I like your quote.

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Life is like a cherry blossom, when one part falls another part blooms.

~Christopher John Brown
:iconevil-bug:
:D thanks

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